Haley B asked:
I’m 14 and I think im creative. the twilight saga is amazing in my opinion. so I decide to try, but unsuccessfully finish a supernatural romance story. Instead of vampires i was thing about using zombies, but they aren’t gross, they are quite good looking thankyouverymuch. i just can’t finish it, so [...]
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Is this a great story so far or what?
Books and Authors: How does this sound?
Haley asked:
I remember in my childhood my best friend, Michelle , used to take the plastic soda bottles that were on the banks of the Ohio River at my grandmothers house and put messages in them. She put twigs in them when we were four. I wonder if anyone ever got our letters [...]
How does this story sound?
Haley asked:
I remember in my childhood my best friend, Michelle , used to take the plastic soda bottles that were on the banks of the Ohio River at my grandmothers house and put messages in them. She put twigs in them when we were four. I wonder if anyone ever got our letters [...]
How much description is too much description?
Stammo asked:
I am currently working on my fourth major edit of my first major novel that I plan on publishing within a year or two. But as I have been working on this edit, I cannot stop wondering, is this just too much description?
My other edits consisted of lots of dialogue, [...]
Here’s th preface and a little bit of the first chapter of a book im working on tell me what you think
kar asked:
it’s a little long but please read it all i would have made a link but im not quite sure how do do that sorry.
Preface
It all started a long time ago back when the world was one and its people lived side by side and lived for thinking of others before themselves. Back [...]
My Short Story, just for fun : ) Any comments appreciated?
Brigid asked:
I just found this story that was a result of an all-nighter i pulled my freshman year of high school : ) haha Reactions, anyone?
What Happened on Tempest Point
Outside the luxurious Seaview Hotel, the tide crashed on to the dunes of Tempest Point. Tourists crowded the areas of the beach that weren’t [...]
what do you think?
Bob F asked:
When I was to say my last goodbyes, I promised her so much, even the stars. Then I glanced into her eyes, I saw the stars shining. She looked back at me with a look of satisfaction. As our lips came in contact with one another, we realized that we were meant [...]
I just want some constructive criticism for this story that I’m writing?
Jack Duluoz Is Back in the USSR asked:
The part that I have here is in the middle half of the story-line. It’s a little long. Any thoughts on this piece, opinions? Thank you in advance. I also posted this here because I didn’t know where else to post it. Anyway, here it is:
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How do u like my sisters story
Lestat De Lioncourt lover asked:
i know its long its some of the first chapter and the preface there are also a few wrongs she spelled wrong lol she meant to put ears n instead she put ears
it’s a little long but please read it all i would have made a link but im [...]
does anyone else find these the best stories ever?
Bob F asked:
When I was to say my last goodbyes, I promised her so much, even the stars. Then I glanced into her eyes, I saw the stars shining. She looked back at me with a look of satisfaction. As our lips came in contact with one another, we realized that we were meant [...]