splurp asked:
A pantoum! How about that! A little less rigid than the typical pantoum…http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pantoum
Anyways…here it is:
Maryanne
Ten years had lived Maryanne:
A blushing lassie with flaxen braids and
checkered dress of strawberries and cream.
With yearning sapphire eyes.
The blushing lassie with flaxen braids
stumbled into a human crib.
Her glittering sapphire eyes yearned
a cradle, wrapped delicately in soft, furry blanket.
Her [...]
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Care to criticize/comment on my poem?
What do you think of This poem?
lilsisdanimomma asked:
The Worker and the Vet
He drinks every drop to make the memories stop
but all that is does is keep them strong.
He’s been too many times to that one place in time
The place we call Vietnam
he sits on the corner as those all around him
start laughing and making fun of him..
“look at [...]
what’s the theme of this poem?
Joanne asked:
The Angel’s Cry
I lay on the fresh green grass,
And gazed into the boundless blue sky.
I closed my eyes, cleared my mind,
Inhaled deeply, and let out a sigh.
The bird’s melodic chirps filled me with joy,
As I marvelled at the magnificent flower.
The Sun’s warmth was like a warm blanket,
Protecting me with all its power.
Then I [...]
A long poem I wrote: Thoughts?
Adam Joseph Chambers asked:
[Title] The Soul Will Not Be Globalized
The soul will not be globalized
It shall not bear the cursed mark of the beast
Nor shall it be found falling down upon its knees
The draft board will not have me fighting
When any open wound is biting
It shall not bleed in sacrifice
For said revived Empire, the [...]
A Poem I posted last year, comments welcome again?
Dani asked:
Warning, long read:
THE WORKER AND THE VET
He drinks every drop,
To make the memories stop,
But all that is does,
is make them more strong.
He’s been too many times,
To that one place in time,
That place in the dark,
The place called Vietnam.
Now it is cold,
And the wind,
Knows no Mercy.
He sits on the corner,
As those all around him,
Start [...]