What is a good conclusion?
Submitted by admin on May 30, 2009 – 6:27 pm2 Comments
Brown Chicken Brown Cow asked:
I AM WRITTING A PERSUASSIVE ESSAY ON THE DRAFT-
DRAFT IR WHEN YOU GET A LETTER FROM THE ARMY THAT YOU HAVE TO JOIN THE WAR..
I AM WRITTING ON HOW THE DRAFT IS WRONG
MY 3 REASINS ARE
1. TO MANNY SOLDIERS DYING
2. COMING BACK HOME DRAMATIZED
3. NOT ENOUGH MONEY TO SUPPORT SOLDIERS(FOOD, CLOTHES,BLANKETS,ETC.)
PLEASE HELP ME
NO RUDE COMMENTS
umm..i dont know
should i…
NO.2 more points
wait do u want all of them included??